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It's bloody unfair

I want to meet you, to give you a hug and greet you

Cos you're my best friend

But I don't know where you are

And even if I did, I wouldn't know how to get there

And even if I did, I wouldn't get past the problems

And even if I did, there wouldn't be a chance in hell that I could talk to you

And even if I could, what would I say? I wouldn't have a clue

And even if I did, you might judge me by it

And even if you did, I'd still love you.

I really miss you, you're on my side and I can't see you

I can't even hear you

I can't get to you

Cos I'm a coward, but even if I wasn't

…there would be problems.
©2009 ~pie-liner
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:iconpeculiarchemicalista:
I love it!!! :love:
you know, this would make a good monologue. haha! I act and I can tell that these are beautiful lines fit for a song or a monologue. :XD:
There's an awesome writer inside you ;P

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"You have never fooled me. I only fooled you."
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HAHA, nahhh, I was just pissed off :XD: but thank you so much (for the sweet comment and the fave!) :hug:

And LOL, yeah, my poems are pretty much monologues ;)
xoxoxoxoxoxoxox

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if I'll ever have the chance to monologue it, may I? I'll never forget to credit you!

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"You have never fooled me. I only fooled you."

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